domingo, 10 de abril de 2011

My propooosaaal :)

      Many criminals from the moment they are put in jailed their lifes changes for ever.Many try to suicide because they feel lonely.In this short essay I will make a proposal which I think I can improved the system in whict they can relate with persons outside the jail.
     Many problems have ocurred and are occuring with criminals that are in jail.Criminals have been raped by other criminals inside the jail.They feel lonely and depressed because they only have the right to have visits.To resolve those problems  I proposed to give them the right of having a day inside the jail with their family.Also,to permit them to just not only receive visits from their partners but let them stay in a room in the jail for the night,always under protection because the pupose of this right is not for womens to raise childrens without a paternity figure or a women needing to have a baby in the jail. This will help a lot the criminals and also the society that are outside the jail because their family suffer as well as the criminals are suffering.In addition,it will resolve the problem of criminals being raped so frequently by other criminals.This new right will mantain the union of  alot of the partners.They will not have an excused to be unfaithful with their partners.
     In conclusion my proposal can change a lot of thing but in a positive way.Criminals suffer alot in jail and eventhought they have the fault of being there,nobody can take away the lifes of that human being and the people that surround them.Also,it can help in less raping in the jails and less violence.

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